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on Thursday, June 16 @ 04:14:56 UTC
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: Love Yourself
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on Thursday, June 16 @ 04:14:56 UTC
suv_rockz writes:: " Need you to realise you’re the perfect guy
Dunno why you feel that I always lie
When I say you’re the best – to die for
Your smile leaves people waiting for more
The way you laugh and everything seems okay
The way I blush at everything you say
Love the way you say it’ll be all right
Care too much to let you outta my sight
You’re not just funny but you’re also smart
And the best looking guy with a caring heart
You’re truly the best, there can be none like you
I’m crazy about you and everything you do
I need you to believe what I say is true
I’m telling you this coz I care about you
Just start loving yourself and then you’ll see
Why loving you comes to easily to me
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Re: Love Yourself (Score: 1)
by apostolos on Thursday, June 16 @ 11:41:27 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | i agree GREAT POEM its got a natural rythm to it which makes it enjoyable at the same time the message of your passion for this guy is brought about nicely I particularly like the last two lines. Once again a great poem If this about a real guy make sure he sees this who knows maybe he'll have a change of heart |
Re: Love Yourself (Score: 1)
by Dhruv on Thursday, June 16 @ 11:58:36 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | truly, as a critic, this is your best poem yet, and one of the best i've ever read
truly amazing, brilliant..!
i wonder who the guy is...? or is it just a wild shot, like mine?
anyway, it rocks. great job, suv! |
Re: Love Yourself (Score: 1)
by Poison (pphmcasnfmc@cs.com) on Thursday, June 16 @ 05:57:11 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Very nice,,If this is truly about someone you care for and he dose,nt see that then he must be blind
Poison |
Re: Love Yourself (Score: 1)
by debu206 on Thursday, June 16 @ 10:42:51 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | nice poem..........lucky guy
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