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on Sunday, June 19 @ 20:39:15 UTC
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: My Shallow Grave
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on Sunday, June 19 @ 20:39:15 UTC
MusicalPoet writes:: " Place me inside of this shallow grave,
This dark pit you alone have made.
Throw me in and watch me break,
Feast your eyes on the torment I taste.
Gleefully cheer as you observe my demise,
Do nothing to stop the fire in your eyes.
Watch as I writhe and scream out in pain,
Then casually turn and simply saunter away.
Go back to your life and the things that you do,
For you close your eyes, easily shut out the view.
When the day ends and you so comfortably rest,
You choose not to think of my untimely death. "
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Re: My Shallow Grave (Score: 1)
by frutloopz on Saturday, June 25 @ 06:24:48 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Superb!...like this alot and i feel for you friend....awsome...
-loopz |
Re: My Shallow Grave (Score: 1)
by stillgogo (stillgogo@cs.com) on Monday, June 20 @ 14:27:08 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | very well writen ...liked it alot k/w penny |
Re: My Shallow Grave (Score: 1)
by Poison (pphmcasnfmc@cs.com) on Monday, June 20 @ 15:53:53 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Very deep,,,,,6' to be exact,,,Flowed well and kept me reading till the end.
Very good read
Poison |
Re: My Shallow Grave (Score: 1)
by RavensWitch on Monday, June 20 @ 10:40:08 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | awesome...you can feel the pain in your description. wished only there was more of it to read. |
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