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Thoughtful
Posted by on Sunday, July 03 @ 22:14:50 UTC

: My Best Friend
on Sunday, July 03 @ 22:14:50 UTC
jadetedder writes:: " "My Best Friend"

My best friend is someone who I look up to,
she has always been there 4 me and i have been there 4 her its like we are sisters! One lil lie cant break us apart!!!
We have been together 4 5 or 6 years it seems like but really only 3.

Why are ppl so jealous of our love and friendship we have for each other?




Now why do ppl say she does all of these drugs and a bunch of crap??????
They are so jealous because me and my best friend are all we will ever be!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "


 
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Re: My Best Friend (Score: 1)
by apostolos on Sunday, July 03 @ 23:17:34 UTC
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This isnt quite a poem its more of a announcement or something anyway its not bad its sweet and i have siblings so i can understand it anyway the funny thing is i have a poem that i wrote with the exact same title and yet they are so much different feel free to read it anyway not a bad job k/w


Re: My Best Friend (Score: 1)
by Poison (pphmcasnfmc@cs.com) on Sunday, July 03 @ 23:28:52 UTC
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Unfourtantly i agree with apostolos comment. You are making a statement about someone to someone. Although it is stated very well, it leaves alot of unanswered questions. Who? What? When and Where and even sometimes Why? I felt like i had accidently found one of my daughters letters to one of her friends. Anyways
Keep on inkin the pages
Poison


Re: My Best Friend (Score: 1)
by eyerice on Monday, July 04 @ 00:44:10 UTC
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I agree with the other two post- its nice you feel enough about your friend to put it to writing- it does seem highschool- but if that is the biggest of your problems- rumors- your not doing to bad. Real friends stick around and trust you no matter what is said. :)


Re: My Best Friend (Score: 1)
by EsaLoca21 on Wednesday, July 06 @ 13:34:29 UTC
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Well I can understand ur message a lil bit but u should of put a story behind it. We can tell dat ur upset about suttin but u need 2 let us no y do feel diz way N y do think ppl feel diz way about ur friendship....N mayb even ur bestfriend'z point of view!! U no stuff like dat. N u added sum type of detail which kind of showz sum type of feelin but u should of expressed it in a different way. U could of made diz mad powerful if u would of looked within da plot of every thang!! N u should of put ur deepest feelinz into diz...mayb u should read all da commentz n re-read ur poem N u'll probably c wat we r talkin about!! N I really think dat u should re-write it usin every onez advice!! U neva no wat da outcome mite b!! But not 4 nuttin it waz a very good try!!
much LUV!!
LOCA!!


 
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