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on Wednesday, July 13 @ 07:49:26 UTC
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: am I alone
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on Wednesday, July 13 @ 07:49:26 UTC
rebbie writes:: " I'm not like you people
I'm not that strong inside
I'm not like you people
I just can't help but hide
I'm not like you people
I always feel so blue
I'm not like you people
I don't know what to do
I'm not like you people
I struggle to be alive
I'm not like you people
I think I wanna die
I'm not like you people
I am lonely and I'm blind
I'm not like you people
am I?
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Re: am I alone (Score: 1)
by Rebbie on Wednesday, July 13 @ 07:54:06 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) http://rebbie.blogdrive.com | I know this sounds a little stupid....
just imagine that (I) the writer is a poor,sick, lonely, miserable kid who sees no more hope in life. yah!
crticize please............
or just try to understand my message :-) or whatever |
Re: am I alone (Score: 1)
by mariana_martinez (bananas_and_honey@hotmail.com) on Wednesday, July 13 @ 14:47:22 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | i think your message is quite clear, and i don't think your post was necessary because the poem gives that mental picture of the tortured soul of a hormonal teenager |
Re: am I alone (Score: 1)
by funeral_of_hearts on Thursday, July 14 @ 04:59:12 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | marianna.. you dont think his post was necessary? thats a bit harsh. everyones post is necessary otherwise there would be no poetry. if it matters to the writer then its worth writing about.
personally rebbie, its short and simple and explains the continuous screams of the lost generation. hell, someones gotta express it huh?? you keep on writing, whatever it is. its all about the passion. and no, you're not alone :) |
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