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: Tonight I lost my virginity.…?
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on Wednesday, July 13 @ 23:38:56 UTC
BiasedSecret writes:: " You crowded my mind
with thoughts of mystifying inquiry
which turned me on
you first started slow
moving your lips in a rhythmic flow
and asked
Who are you?
Moving on
You explained your view on abortion
Explained the resonance of scientific extortion
That baby killing was not justifiable
However the world we lived in made it necessary, a new way of protecting vanity and avoiding responsibility
And promised me
that we would never abort a baby we made out of love…..
Then you lead me into a world of Submission
Gently….a cry escaped from quivering lips which made
you Stop; immediately.
stared into my eyes
caressingly
told me that you could see the sun set and rise fluoresce
through lakes of brown shimmers
Smiles
Next you sat and held me
Took timid glances occasionally
You Fed me with passion through shallow breaths
That secreted a warm mist from your mouth, lightly hitting my chapped lips
Consumption
We rested in each others deafening silence and
heart swallowing grips of tenderness
Last night I did not lose my vir gin nity through sexual penetration,
but emotional security and intellectual stimulation
Not consecutive “I love you’s”
But creative phrases
“The fire we have burns eternally creating linear embers wallowing in forever”
Last Night
you and i
We,
made beautiful love
Through verbal romance
and mutual understanding
"
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Re: Tonight I lost my virginity.…? (Score: 1)
by BiasedSecret on Thursday, July 14 @ 08:40:31 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | After the lines "heart swallowing grips of tenderness"it should read
Shackled in each others love
sorry about that
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Re: Tonight I lost my virginity.…? (Score: 1)
by algoressister on Thursday, July 14 @ 11:16:53 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Hee HeeHee.... I like both endings......the authors' is the best of course.....best use of the word virginity I have read in a long time......also a romantic sentiment that was worth hearing....thank you....ttfn Laurel |
Re: Tonight I lost my virginity.…? (Score: 1)
by EsaLoca21 on Thursday, July 14 @ 13:46:14 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Dat waz beautiful!!! Keep doin ya THANG!!!
much LUV!!
LOCA!! |
Re: Tonight I lost my virginity.…? (Score: 1)
by BiasedSecret on Thursday, July 14 @ 14:19:35 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Hey, thanks for the comments. I find interesting that i only got responses from females only. Secretly I think this is the type of sex we all want but aren't always given.
Thanks
-brit
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Re: Tonight I lost my virginity.…? (Score: 1)
by jacy on Thursday, July 14 @ 16:12:05 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | normally everyone regrets when they lost their virginity. but this one is fresh and knew in that repect. but it sounds like youve found a poetic soul to make love with. just like me :D
we are lucky lucky ppl
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Re: Tonight I lost my virginity.…? (Score: 1)
by syloss (syloss1@yahoo.com) on Sunday, February 19 @ 09:02:55 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Very powerful! I especially was drawn to; “You Fed me with passion through shallow breaths That secreted a warm mist from your mouth, lightly hitting my chapped lips”. , It could have so many connotations. Thank you for sharing this with us.
James
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Re: Tonight I lost my virginity.…? (Score: 1)
by oralrhapsody (masimsapr@aol.com) on Sunday, December 04 @ 21:36:23 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Alright Biased don't hurt nobody lol.
I quivered a bit... Peace |
Re: Tonight I lost my virginity.…? (Score: 1)
by Shaneyungphat on Wednesday, October 12 @ 22:02:36 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Very well written. Makes me envious of the relationship. I will tell my wife to thank you for our separation. :P
shane yung phat |
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