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on Wednesday, July 20 @ 11:08:24 UTC
BrianKeith writes:: " What can I say to you?
For you have your owm life.
I can only sit here and wonder.
I stand and sit as I ponder.
What is your true feelings for me?
Am I wasteing my time?
Am I just lost with in a state of loneliness?
Lost in words.
How can I tell you how I feel when I know not how I feel?
So I sit back and watch you from afar.
Words of love echo through out my cold heart.
Words of untrust echo through out my mind.
Where could I begin if I tried.
So another day goes by remorseing on the tears I've cried.
Where in the world is my peace of mind?
Where can I uptain my tranquility?
How can I say I LOVE YOU "
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Re: Untitled (Score: 1)
by perv (pervoe@thepowerofomnipotence.com) on Tuesday, July 26 @ 11:21:14 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) http://thepowerofomnipotence.com | Good to see you uptaining you're owm tranquility
But don't untrust your remorseing
Or am i just wasteing my time
How can you posibly criticise my English you uneducated churl?
I suggest you invest in a copy of the OED |
- Re: Untitled by BrianKeith on Wednesday, July 27 @ 07:33:45 UTC
- Re: Untitled by perv on Tuesday, August 02 @ 04:40:48 UTC
- Re: Untitled by BrianKeith on Tuesday, August 02 @ 11:48:20 UTC
Re: Untitled (Score: 1)
by BrianKeith on Thursday, July 21 @ 15:35:21 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Its funny you all talk about me and my poems but 2 peaple rated a 4
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Re: Untitled (Score: 1)
by BrianKeith on Wednesday, July 20 @ 11:38:38 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | This poem is dedicated to you SHilo.
I LOVE YOU and I trust you |
Re: Untitled (Score: 1)
by perv (pervoe@thepowerofomnipotence.com) on Wednesday, July 20 @ 15:45:09 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) http://thepowerofomnipotence.com | a grasp of the english language, it is usually accepted, is a prerequisite for poetry written in english.
a basic understanding of spelling and grammar is also desirable. as you are writing on a computer this is just lazy
or are you spending too much time remorseing?
or looking after the milk mans kids?
HA! |
- Re: Untitled by BrianKeith on Thursday, July 21 @ 07:07:16 UTC
- Re: Untitled by SB_Gypsy on Thursday, July 21 @ 09:48:36 UTC
- Re: Untitled by BrianKeith on Thursday, July 21 @ 11:30:15 UTC
Re: Untitled (Score: 1)
by algoressister on Thursday, July 21 @ 09:43:21 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Brian,
If you are having a hard time coming up with a title (just another sign you do not give this work much dicipline)....Maybe the name of this poem should be.... How can I get my head out of my ass to speak......Trust me....that is why you are so lonely....noone wants to hang out, IN THERE, with you....it smells bad.....and since it is so tight....there is not much room for new ideas.......being judgemental can be applied to yourself.......try it.....you seem to wallow in it when it comes to other people......LUV Laurel (The WHORE)
PS If you ARE working on a computer....WRITE your poetry etc. in a word processing program like Word Perfect...use the resources it has for spelling etc. Then copy and paste the final product onto the submission site.......you're welcome |
- Re: Untitled by BrianKeith on Thursday, July 21 @ 11:33:38 UTC
- Re: Untitled by BrianKeith on Thursday, July 21 @ 12:45:53 UTC
- Re: Untitled by algoressister on Thursday, July 21 @ 12:55:59 UTC
- Re: Untitled by BrianKeith on Thursday, July 21 @ 13:34:13 UTC
- Re: Untitled by algoressister on Friday, July 22 @ 18:04:06 UTC
- Re: Untitled by BrianKeith on Saturday, July 23 @ 07:20:30 UTC
- Re: Untitled by BrianKeith on Saturday, July 23 @ 07:23:25 UTC
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