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Turbulent
Posted by on Tuesday, August 23 @ 06:59:36 UTC

: My pathetic Father
on Tuesday, August 23 @ 06:59:36 UTC
BrianKeith writes:: " I challenge the words of you MY Father.
Light turns to darkness as my days progress on.
Smiles are now only frowns to me.
The pain you made me shed for it is now permitly in my head.
I never coward to the beast you showed me.
I fought and I conquered your forsaken ways.
I never look upon you in my darkest days.
I struggled through my own darkest hours.
Father this pain I have has now became ours.
You gave your life for pathetic souls like my own.
You suffered the torment of hatred from others,
as well did I.
Why am I chosen now to recieve this modern pain.
Yes me one of the chosen ones that suffer mentally to your fallen angel Satan.
Oh Father where are you I now ask?
Why haven't you saved me when I came to you.
You only turned your back to every preyer I preyed.
Now look at me my father who art in heaven.
Watch as I grow my forbidden horns.
I grow them now for I have repented you.
Hell isn't as bad as you made it out to be oh Father.
Take back your holy halo for it means nothing to me.
I am this way because you forgot about me my pathetic FATHER.


By brian Keith "


 
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Re: My pathetic Father (Score: 1)
by probat (probat84@aol.com) on Tuesday, August 23 @ 09:50:34 UTC
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Bro im loving your poem i can feel it, its the best ...Mr Probato


Re: My pathetic Father (Score: 1)
by genan on Wednesday, August 24 @ 15:54:24 UTC
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Did the thought ever cross your mind while writing this that maybe you turned your back on him? Just a thought.
-genan-


 
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