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Reflective
Posted by on Monday, August 29 @ 11:27:06 UTC

: Our Empty Home
on Monday, August 29 @ 11:27:06 UTC
probat writes:: " I've reached the bottom of another bottle as I try to forget your eyes

My heart turned into an empty house at the sound of your murderous good byes

We used to get into arguments but this one has broken hearts and dreams

Outside the sky has turned cloudy and all I can hear is your painful screams

I pour another glass of whatever I can find as I try to forget about your smile

The room has emptied and now my heart turned into old clothes left in a pile



I try to hold back from saying your name but girl how can I forget your every kiss

I'm alone in the house you once knew and I don't know if my soul will stand all of this

Your sweet voice keeps me awake and your pictures remind me of how it used to be

Girl our love that was so right and now I have to forget about the ways you hurt me

This room seems so empty and this heart is a road that has no cars or a person in sight

Girl we erased a love story that lasted for years in just one cold and lonely night


"


 
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Re: Our Empty Home (Score: 1)
by apostolos on Monday, August 29 @ 16:04:19 UTC
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I liked it like all your poetry its about kamia gomena haha anyway this is just some constructive criticism i know you write long lines its just my opinion if you make them too long it disturbs the flow of the poem. Its up to you if you want to take my advice Its just something i noticed


 
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