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Posted by
on Wednesday, August 31 @ 09:05:19 UTC
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: The Messenger
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on Wednesday, August 31 @ 09:05:19 UTC
Anonymous writes:: " I wish I'd told you,
Just how I feel,
But my tongue beat not as fast,
As my heart can speak.
In awe and reverence,
I tried to define, depict and delineate your grace.
And its in this great place of destiny,
That my message appeared fickle and frail in substance -
Frantic in motion and gesticulation,
Abstract in fact,
For how could art,
Seem so unversed and rushed,
So unrehearsed.
I recall of you sat right there,
And in my playful penmanship,
Inscribed your name in calligraphy,
For it now remains enciphered in poetry -
A collage of camouflaged language,
Which I cannot pretend to comprehend.
My message, maundered as I muttered,
Stuttered and stammered,
And I cannot explain,
How my words came to spill,
And seem so dilute and adulterate,
So inelaborate.
(C) TR 2005 "
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Re: The Messenger (Score: 1)
by apostolos on Wednesday, August 31 @ 10:53:02 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | pretty good like the rhymes |
Re: The Messenger (Score: 1)
by GracieLou (goodnight_gracie2@yahoo.com) on Wednesday, August 31 @ 16:55:24 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | WOW! This is beatiful, and I couldn't have said it better myself!!
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Re: The Messenger (Score: 1)
by oralrhapsody on Thursday, September 01 @ 13:13:28 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Trying to describe what you did with this piece would require another poem within itself. It's a very common situation stated in a unique manner. I love it...Peace |
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