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on Monday, February 02 @ 21:32:35 UTC
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: FREESTYLE
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on Monday, February 02 @ 21:32:35 UTC
The-Lyrical-Miracle writes:: " Like the movie Ground Hog day in every way
my rhymes are always in constant repitition.
Bringing forth my game with competition.
I drop bombs leaving you in submission.
Beyond all your knowledge and comprehension.
I'm a universal soldier set out on a mission.
Signing autographs as if they were a petition.
I'm setting forth on this expedition and
once you blink I'm here I'm there then I'm missing
carrying on with pride through this edition.
This edition of life.... should I stay single
Or find me a wife, maybe go out and mingle
enforcing shit like Barney Fife
like on the Andy Griffith show.
Except I'm a lyracist though.
Waiting for the word GO.
Then I blow as I flow.
Leavin you askin sup wit dat Yo?
The Lyrical Miracle: Yokosuka's Most Wanted "
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Re: FREESTYLE (Score: 1)
by mumstheword on Tuesday, February 03 @ 00:09:36 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | get a life |
Re: FREESTYLE (Score: 1)
by mumstheword on Tuesday, February 03 @ 00:11:29 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | get a life. |
- Re: FREESTYLE by The-Lyrical-Miracle on Tuesday, February 03 @ 02:08:18 UTC
- Your Response by Ravenloft on Tuesday, February 03 @ 20:18:18 UTC
- Re: FREESTYLE by mumstheword on Tuesday, February 03 @ 15:11:58 UTC
- Re: FREESTYLE by The-Lyrical-Miracle on Wednesday, February 04 @ 03:25:53 UTC
Re: FREESTYLE (Score: 1)
by Ravenloft (devinouis@hotmail.com) on Tuesday, February 03 @ 20:16:55 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | uhh.. Hahahahaha.. Sounds like you need to be a rapper, though you're need some better lyrics than that, "Yo", if you ever want to get anywhere. |
Re: FREESTYLE (Score: 1)
by Baby_Girl on Saturday, March 13 @ 15:19:26 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | I didn't think it was that bad......i happen to be a fan of Rap/Hip-hop etc.....and with some work i think it could be aiight.......as always tho, keep writing!! |
Re: FREESTYLE (Score: 1)
by Lee-Civico-Cambell (manfishcake@yahoo.co.uk) on Tuesday, November 15 @ 09:48:39 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Repetitious is the right word.
I am a fan of hip-hop/rap and I also believe that with all the lyrics changing and some thought going into the work, rather than using a twelve year olds rhyming dictionary it would work better.
Cheers
Lee |
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