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: wishsong
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on Thursday, September 22 @ 21:54:39 UTC
eressea writes:: " i want...
i would like...
it would be nice to have someone here with me.
that would be the best, i think, and i think you would like it, too...
i have searched and searched and still have not found that one who is searching for the same thing.
i have tried and tried--but i have tried so hard and still nothing has come my way...
oh, there have been times that it has seemed paradise and flowers and beautiful songs all along the way,
but dark clouds have come and rained on our two-person parade...
practically swept us away...
apart...
have i been looking in all the right places?
are my standards so that no one can come near?
what is wrong with wanting a certain thing?
a certain trait or look to let me know without a shadow of a doubt that there will be no clouds this time.
no sweeping rain...
rain is nice, but only in the right circumstance...
dancing in the rain...
that is what i want...
dancing to no music, loud music, the right music... it doesn't matter...
walking and talking, knowing that this person knows you and you know them...
walking and no talking, but still knowing...
sitting on the curb, just sitting and watching the cars go by, watching the stars run their course in the sky...
cold nights with frosty breath...
and that arm comes round you and you know it's right...
wonderful...
beautiful...
i want...
i would like...
it would be nice to have someone here with me...
that would be the best, i think, and i think you would like it, too... "
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Re: wishsong (Score: 1)
by LandOfPerpetualWednesdays on Friday, September 23 @ 16:54:10 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | you just made my eyes well up and my lip wobble. this is incredible. i just kind of stared at it for a couple of minutes after i finished reading it; i couldn't recover right away. fantastic job, and i sincerely hope that you find who you're looking for. |
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