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on Thursday, September 29 @ 00:00:00 UTC
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A better Man?
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on Thursday, September 29 @ 00:00:00 UTC
lee-civico-cambell writes:: " Mr. below average,
IQ of 99.
2.4 brain cells.
1.2s not even mine.
Ask me how I feel,
I’ll say I’m fine.
Ask me how I deal,
I’ll take a different line.
Enter a madman,
presence like a gun
Wicked in thought,
In a world that’s numb.
Post-op renaissance,
In a pre-op gown.
I'm going somewhere,
If only down down.
I think I’m deep,
So deep I might drown.
Inside a philosopher,
Outside, a clown.
Calm exterior,
but bubbling below.
I don’t need you,
pack up now, go.
Go and I’ll miss you,
stay and be struck.
Go and I’ll wish you,
the greatest of luck.
Your inability to appease,
Is just another chasm.
I only ever was with you,
for the big jerky spasm.
Wishing I could be a better man, levels more equal. "
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Re: A better Man? (Score: 1)
by Choevyn on Tuesday, November 29 @ 16:11:05 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | You write phenomenal poetry!
You start out self-effacing, slide into this almost threatening exegesis of who you really are on the inside--digressing for a weel-wishing-- and then slip under the radar with a total slap in the face.
Absolutely nuts!
Dude
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Re: A better Man? (Score: 1)
by Choevyn on Tuesday, November 29 @ 16:11:34 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | You write phenomenal poetry!
You start out self-effacing, slide into this almost threatening exegesis of who you really are on the inside--digressing for a well-wishing-- and then slip under the radar with a total slap in the face.
Absolutely nuts!
Dude
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